Friday, April 30, 2010

You are not my shadow.. But the Rhythm of my heart..



I reminisce the day I saw you...
You were a dream, I couldn't deny.
I felt all the stars have lined up for me,
You were my fate, my shadow, my lullaby!

You reached out for me...
Calling me your 'Juliet'!
I shivered, pleased to have you as my romeo...
My heart pounding, beating like a clariot!

I sneaked out every night to meet you...
for having precious moments...Just You and Me;
little did I know that destiny had other plans,
And the bright future I was holding on to, was never meant to be.

You cherished me as I am the most coveted award,
when you left me in the meadow,
you promised you would come back from your sabbatical,
and you claimed yourself as my shadow.

Even though you are no longer here,
the love is still blossoming between us.
Even though life isn't fair...
I never lose my trust!

Life has its own ways,
I have finally started to accept my shrewd fate.
The world watches me waiting for you,
They are disdainful, glance my way with here and now hate!

I believe you would be mine,
Even if we are torn apart.
I love you still, and you made me realise...
You are not my shadow...But the rhythm of my heart!

Ananya
( Author's notes : This poem was written for an on the spot poem writing Inter-school Competition in 15 minutes and It actually managed to win the first prize! :) :) This poem has been put here on request by a follower. So, I hope you like it... Do the needful and do comment. :)
Cheers..
Ananya)

4 Your takes:

Unknown said...

ohhhhh wow yrrr gr8 going ananya .......

MangoMan said...

:) :) :) Mush always feels great!! Amazing for on-the-spot, honestly!!

My take on Mush: http://thesleepinginsomniac.blogspot.com/2010/05/lot-of-mush-lot-of-room.html

ranveer said...

Nice Words Best feelings i like ur All poems

Fatima said...

wow this one is truly awesome !! i'm rendered speechless..:) deserved to grab d first position :)

it truly defines d tale of an unfulfilled..unbiased..true n poise love!!

This verse was very touching..

"The world watches me waiting for you,
They are disdainful, glance my way with here and now hate!

I believe you would be mine,
Even if we are torn apart.
I love you still, and you made me realise...
You are not my shadow...But the rhythm of my heart!"

keep up d good work :)

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