Breathless Soul: Lullaby

Saturday, August 20, 2011

Lullaby

Don't sing for me, oh

melodist, I need my mother to sing

me my lullaby today.

Ananya

6 Your takes:

Gowthami Nandigala said...: Sweeet...

Nothing can repalce mom's lullaby :); August 20, 2011 at 11:24 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: quite beautiful, Ananya.. but do look in to your syllable count :) it shouldn't exceed 17, but urs takes a 5-10-7 format, totally 22 are there!; August 20, 2011 at 11:31 PM
Vinay Leo R. said...: oh, and regards the challenge, not very big rules.. a haiku a day on the theme given :) thats basically it. you can find the topics for the challenge in the page over at the blog..; August 20, 2011 at 11:32 PM
Anonymous said...: everyone needs a lullaby from mom every once in a while!; August 21, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Someone is Special said...: I agree.. Mom's lullaby is the best one in this world..

Someone is Special; August 22, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Anonymous said...: Nice verse ... it could easily conform to the 5-7-5 format with very minor tweaking!; August 22, 2011 at 8:01 PM

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