Saturday, August 20, 2011

Lullaby





Don't sing for me, oh
melodist, I need my mother to sing
me my lullaby today.


Ananya

6 Your takes:

Gowthami Nandigala said...

Sweeet...

Nothing can repalce mom's lullaby :)

Leo said...

quite beautiful, Ananya.. but do look in to your syllable count :) it shouldn't exceed 17, but urs takes a 5-10-7 format, totally 22 are there!

Leo said...

oh, and regards the challenge, not very big rules.. a haiku a day on the theme given :) thats basically it. you can find the topics for the challenge in the page over at the blog..

iblogmoore (Amanda Moore) said...

everyone needs a lullaby from mom every once in a while!

Someone is Special said...

I agree.. Mom's lullaby is the best one in this world..

Someone is Special

beccagivens said...

Nice verse ... it could easily conform to the 5-7-5 format with very minor tweaking!

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