Saturday, April 2, 2011

Breathless Soul speaks


I descend from a fairytale..
Talk to me, I am an abigail.
Founders are not keepers here,
dreamers sure are!
Darkness falls under the wings of light,
But hope resides in my heart!
I do not chase withering muses...
I survive on blythe.
I don't offer adulterated indulgences..
For I am an undefeated myth!
Sure, in your certitude...
I play an insignificant role,
I am not anything more than a chiarascuro...
But Oh well, I am a Breathless Soul!

Ananya

Writers Notes : This is basically an attempt to complete both NaPoWriMo 2011 and The A- Z challenge :) I have named this piece as Breathless Soul speaks because this was written keeping in mind my blog personification. Hope you understand.
Comments and criticism always welcomed! :)
Take care
Ananya
Founder
Breathless soul blog


12 Your takes:

Anonymous said...

beautiful job..

RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Wonderful poem and that cute photo......fantastic.

Yvonne.

N. R. Williams said...

Love the poem and picture, good job.
Nancy
N. R. Williams, The Treasures of Carmelidrium.

Anonymous said...

Great job ...

vaibhav said...

Proust urged his readers be grateful to people who make them happy.


I am grateful to you.

Anonymous said...

Lovely write (and graphic for it). I love the lightness of soul it invokes. Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

I agree this was well done and the pic was a nice touch. welcome

my thursday post was here

http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/04/01/poem-standing-here/

Hyde Park Poetry Palace said...

Happy Rally.
your talent is refreshing...

Jingle

bttrflyscar said...

what a wonderfully unique voice!

http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/selah.html

Anonymous said...

Your pic is beautiful and the lines are uplifting. Great job...

Anonymous said...

Share 1 to 3 poems with poetry potluck today,
Bless you.

first time participants are welcome to share random poems or poems unrelated to the theme.

Anonymous said...

Loved this:-)

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