Thursday, January 28, 2010

Breathless Soul- An Acoustic



Breathless Soul!

B - Beleaguered by a crowd so vast;
R - Roaming around restlessly to search liberty
E - Each face I come taunts my innocence and mocks my conscience,
A - After every dawn rises a new sun; or so I had I heard but
T - there is no awakening to the night I am drowning in.
H - here I am, held bondage by the society for the crime of expression,
L - love for life and freedom to speak!
E - Everybody seems to be flowing with the time and
S - Sans care and affection, I have to learn the hard way,
S - survive the wrath that comes along and succeed anyway!

S- Someday, maybe the world would comprehend my view,
O - Or show a li'l sympathy so as to not intervene my ecstasy.
U - Understand that every soul is not attuned their way
L - Little hope is all I need, to transform into a beautiful from a breathless soul!


Ananya

8 Your takes:

bhavesh said...

breathless soul goin deeper into its roots...gud vocab grl...:)

sanchit said...

Ability is what you're capable of doing. Motivation determines what you do. Attitude determines how well you do it. U've got all of it gal. Make the best of it. And hey dis is just the beginning, raise the bar now...

Gud luk...

Rey said...

keep posting fabulous works lyk this...girl..u gonna b great writer some day

chinu said...

grt work..
awesome...
u rock..

varunsinghal said...

its absolutely awesome..........the way u have compiled the journey of life is simply mindblowing.......and of course teh vocab is truly speechless.......

sahiba said...

simply...heart touching...!!! the way u've xpressed the thoughts as the blog says is breathlessly fabulous..!!

priya said...

suberb fabulos n awesome
its realy heart touching!!!

vaibhav said...

fantabulous ...
gr8 work.God bless.

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